This made me gasp. Thank you for sharing.
The tone in this piece is perfect for a shocking last stanza. Loved it.
Wow, I love this. Excellent. Thanks for posting!
Wow. Definitely makes me want to read more! Thanks for posting it.
Wow--love how the tone changes like that to such a shocking end--then it leaves you realizing it was headed there all along, but our own assumptions masked it.
Amazing command of words! You carried the emotions to an unbelievable height, then thrust the final words to drop the bomb that brought tears to my eyes. Beautiful poem, although my heart goes out to you for the pain you must have suffered for your "Womb-mate." No, I'm not trying to be funny. My senses tell me that your heart has known much pain for having shared and lost someone so special.
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